Wednesday, November 21, 2018
Summer
Today room 1 were doing a poem called Summer. First we had to do it in our reading/writing book. Next in the poem we had to put in our 5 senses,see,taste,smell,hear,and feel.Finally we had to post it on our blog. What I enjoyed doing was creating the poem in my book. What I might do differently next time is make the slide bigger.
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Hi Harley, I'm Isabel from Awahono School. I loved Your Summer DLO! There Is only one thing that could happen maybe you could put more words on one slide because you've got a whole bunch of spare space.
ReplyDeleteHello Harley, my name is Blake from Awahono School. Your poem is very descriptive. Maybe next time you could make the words easier to read?
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas!
-Blake
Hello Harley it's so amazing that you so good at descriptive words
ReplyDeleteit is one of a kind.
Hi Harley,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Iris from Matawai School. I love the cute teddy bear waving and the waves moving in the image. Summer is one of my favourite seasons!
Thanks
Iris
Hi again Harley,
ReplyDeleteIt's Iris.
I love the smell of chicken on the BBQ too! I always hear waves crashing when I go to the beach. Where about is Kaikohe West School?
Thanks
Iris
Hi my name is Violet from Matawai School
ReplyDeleteI love summer so much that I wish that it was summer all the time.
Kia ora Harley my name is Mikaila and I am a year six student from Paihia school. I really liked your presentation about summer. I thought it was an amazing piece of work because the way you used adjective to describe your work on your presentation.
ReplyDeleteWhat inspired you to do this?