Wednesday, November 29, 2017

My weekend to piahia beach

today we have been learning about recount writing here is my writing






On the bursting hot last weekend me and my family went to cold Paihia beach to cool us down from the hot bursting weather First we went to get lunch we were going to Mcdonald’s to eat what we had from it Then we went to go swimming in the freezing cold water it was so cold that we ran out of it because we couldn’t stand the freezing cold water. Then Finally we went back to kaikohe to have fish and chips for dinner and went home to my Comfortable bed and laid down on my smooth comfortable pillow but I was playing roblox and the roblox game that I was playing was boxing simulator 2 it is a game that you're Supposed to get really big tall and really really strong 10 hours later I was at 30million strength that time i was the most strongest person on the server then other people started playing on the server then I decided I didn’t want to be big so I pressed this button that said you can become small but you keep all your strength so I pushed it and I was the smallest person but the strongest then I was getting Exhausted and tired and went dreaming of in my head.

Monday, November 20, 2017

maui and the giant fish


Today we did a practice activity for the Summer Learning Journey.
First we read the story Maui and the Giant Fish.
Then we wrote 3 facts we learned from the story.
Here are my facts:
    Maui and the giant fish

Fact 1: Maui dreamed of a day that he could go fishing with his older brothers.

Fact 2: Maui took the jaw bone his ancestor Muri Ranga Whenua had given him and bound it securely to the line to use it as a fishing hook.

Fact 3: Maui hid on the waka in the hull to go fishing with his brothers. The thing I found challenging is thinking of the ideas to make it sound more interesting. Next time I will try to make it even more interesting by making better words.


Tuesday, September 5, 2017

making bread in the factory


WALT make connections to our prior knowledge first I did the background in my google drawing i'm learning about how to make bread in a factory the part I found easy was the images the thing I will do differently is make one of my blog posts more interesting.

Thursday, August 10, 2017

digging deeper


me and the teacher discussed about digging deeper into our writing to make it more interesting by adding more information in our writing.
   my digital learning is making bigger more interesting sentences by adding more detail 

the most trickiest one I found was trying to put the words in front of my digging deeper hole.
next time I will make another one of my picture more interesting.


Monday, August 7, 2017

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

WALT     Write our opinion
 We had a discussion about how to use OREO to help us with our opinion writing.  
O= Opinion.R=Reason.E=Example.O=state Opinion.   
Here is my opinion.                 
The trickiest thing I found was my thinking of my Examples. 


Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

I think kids shouldn't  have a TV in their bedroom.
You might not go to school.
You might not go to school because you will be too lazy to get up and get ready for school because you stayed up too late the night before. 
you will become obsessed with the screen. because you will be addicted and become a game freak by watching TV too long which will affect your behaviour. 
In addition you will get grumpy. you will watch TV all night and have a grumpy mood in the morning.
This is why I believe kids shouldn't have a TV in their room.


Thursday, July 27, 2017

WALT dig deeper and use words that are more interesting in our writing

the cat sleept.

the cat sleept on my bed.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour and curled in a ball