Wednesday, November 29, 2017

My weekend to piahia beach

today we have been learning about recount writing here is my writing

On the bursting hot last weekend me and my family went to cold Paihia beach to cool us down from the hot bursting weather First we went to get lunch we were going to Mcdonald’s to eat what we had from it Then we went to go swimming in the freezing cold water it was so cold that we ran out of it because we couldn’t stand the freezing cold water. Then Finally we went back to kaikohe to have fish and chips for dinner and went home to my Comfortable bed and laid down on my smooth comfortable pillow but I was playing roblox and the roblox game that I was playing was boxing simulator 2 it is a game that you're Supposed to get really big tall and really really strong 10 hours later I was at 30million strength that time i was the most strongest person on the server then other people started playing on the server then I decided I didn’t want to be big so I pressed this button that said you can become small but you keep all your strength so I pushed it and I was the smallest person but the strongest then I was getting Exhausted and tired and went dreaming of in my head.

Monday, November 20, 2017

maui and the giant fish

Today we did a practice activity for the Summer Learning Journey.
First we read the story Maui and the Giant Fish.
Then we wrote 3 facts we learned from the story.
Here are my facts:
    Maui and the giant fish

Fact 1: Maui dreamed of a day that he could go fishing with his older brothers.

Fact 2: Maui took the jaw bone his ancestor Muri Ranga Whenua had given him and bound it securely to the line to use it as a fishing hook.

Fact 3: Maui hid on the waka in the hull to go fishing with his brothers. The thing I found challenging is thinking of the ideas to make it sound more interesting. Next time I will try to make it even more interesting by making better words.

Tuesday, September 5, 2017

making bread in the factory

WALT make connections to our prior knowledge first I did the background in my google drawing i'm learning about how to make bread in a factory the part I found easy was the images the thing I will do differently is make one of my blog posts more interesting.

Thursday, August 10, 2017

digging deeper

me and the teacher discussed about digging deeper into our writing to make it more interesting by adding more information in our writing.
   my digital learning is making bigger more interesting sentences by adding more detail 

the most trickiest one I found was trying to put the words in front of my digging deeper hole.
next time I will make another one of my picture more interesting.

Monday, August 7, 2017

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

WALT     Write our opinion
 We had a discussion about how to use OREO to help us with our opinion writing.  
O= Opinion.R=Reason.E=Example.O=state Opinion.   
Here is my opinion.                 
The trickiest thing I found was my thinking of my Examples. 

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

I think kids shouldn't  have a TV in their bedroom.
You might not go to school.
You might not go to school because you will be too lazy to get up and get ready for school because you stayed up too late the night before. 
you will become obsessed with the screen. because you will be addicted and become a game freak by watching TV too long which will affect your behaviour. 
In addition you will get grumpy. you will watch TV all night and have a grumpy mood in the morning.
This is why I believe kids shouldn't have a TV in their room.

Thursday, July 27, 2017

WALT dig deeper and use words that are more interesting in our writing

the cat sleept.

the cat sleept on my bed.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour and curled in a ball

Wednesday, July 26, 2017

First maia was sad because when she looked at her poi it went lopsided the taura was loose and one of the huka huka had fallen off. second when she found whole in the plastic bag she put her finger in little the plastic bag she wiggled it and some foam came out  and made a little pile of foam crumbled on her feet Then She Noticed everyone was Quiet  and looking at her her Teacher (mrs waru) stepped Through the rows throwing maia the kapa haka festival is in two weeks what are you doing? Maia said my poi has a whole in it she held it up and more foam fell out she was trying to fix it her teacher said no! Maia you Ruined it maia said whatever, mrs waru was stern and said maia! If you don't want to be here you can sit outside the Principal's office haere atu go now!.lastly mr hayward said you need to make good choices misbehaving in kapa haka is,int a good choice is it? Maia said i’m sorry mr hayward mr hayward said don't you want to practice with your Friends? They’re all working really hard yes but kapa haka is boring I can’t sing I forget the words mr hayward shook his head i’m sure that’s not true but if it is boring why did you join all my friends  are in kapa haka and my Cousins I told them I want to go to the festival with them it’s not fair  to the others if you’re not trying your best mr hayward said he held up her ruined poi miss taiapa is making a new poi for the festival I would like you to help every lunch time instead of kapa haka practice ok ok maia said