Wednesday, November 29, 2017

My weekend to piahia beach

today we have been learning about recount writing here is my writing






On the bursting hot last weekend me and my family went to cold Paihia beach to cool us down from the hot bursting weather First we went to get lunch we were going to Mcdonald’s to eat what we had from it Then we went to go swimming in the freezing cold water it was so cold that we ran out of it because we couldn’t stand the freezing cold water. Then Finally we went back to kaikohe to have fish and chips for dinner and went home to my Comfortable bed and laid down on my smooth comfortable pillow but I was playing roblox and the roblox game that I was playing was boxing simulator 2 it is a game that you're Supposed to get really big tall and really really strong 10 hours later I was at 30million strength that time i was the most strongest person on the server then other people started playing on the server then I decided I didn’t want to be big so I pressed this button that said you can become small but you keep all your strength so I pushed it and I was the smallest person but the strongest then I was getting Exhausted and tired and went dreaming of in my head.

Monday, November 20, 2017

maui and the giant fish


Today we did a practice activity for the Summer Learning Journey.
First we read the story Maui and the Giant Fish.
Then we wrote 3 facts we learned from the story.
Here are my facts:
    Maui and the giant fish

Fact 1: Maui dreamed of a day that he could go fishing with his older brothers.

Fact 2: Maui took the jaw bone his ancestor Muri Ranga Whenua had given him and bound it securely to the line to use it as a fishing hook.

Fact 3: Maui hid on the waka in the hull to go fishing with his brothers. The thing I found challenging is thinking of the ideas to make it sound more interesting. Next time I will try to make it even more interesting by making better words.