Thursday, August 10, 2017

digging deeper

me and the teacher discussed about digging deeper into our writing to make it more interesting by adding more information in our writing.
   my digital learning is making bigger more interesting sentences by adding more detail 

the most trickiest one I found was trying to put the words in front of my digging deeper hole.
next time I will make another one of my picture more interesting.

Monday, August 7, 2017

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

WALT     Write our opinion
 We had a discussion about how to use OREO to help us with our opinion writing.  
O= Opinion.R=Reason.E=Example.O=state Opinion.   
Here is my opinion.                 
The trickiest thing I found was my thinking of my Examples. 

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

I think kids shouldn't  have a TV in their bedroom.
You might not go to school.
You might not go to school because you will be too lazy to get up and get ready for school because you stayed up too late the night before. 
you will become obsessed with the screen. because you will be addicted and become a game freak by watching TV too long which will affect your behaviour. 
In addition you will get grumpy. you will watch TV all night and have a grumpy mood in the morning.
This is why I believe kids shouldn't have a TV in their room.