WALT increasing vocabulary today room 1 had been doing pobble 365 for a couple of months.First we searched up the website and find the pobble 365 writing were doing.Next we copied the writing and pasted the writing into a document.Finally once we were finished we had to send the link to room 1's hand-in-sheet and post it on our blog. What I enjoyed was writing more writing to give more details. What I might do differently next time is add more interesting words to add better detail
The boy leant to his left and swooped around another corner. He never felt more alive than when he was on his magic carpet.
Finding a straight stretch of road he urged the carpet to top speed, sending plumes of dust from the ground all around him. He quickly approached a woman dressed in black carrying a bowl of fruit
The Genie stole a delicious scrumptious apple from the bowl of fruit and bolted into the air going faster than a flash. He gazed at the amazing view of the kingdom then he laughed Hysterically because he didn’t get caught. The woman was so furious.
“ I WILL FIND YOU!” she shouted with all her might.
Looking around, the genie replied
“What was that? Who cares”.
The next sunrise he woke up and he peeked through the window. The woman was right outside his doorstep.
“I must be Hallucinating” he thought to himself, as he punched himself to see if he was dreaming.
Sneakily he tiptoed to his magic carpet and zoomed out of the door bolting as fast as the magic carpet can go. Surprisingly the carpet ran out of energy and fell straight to the ground. The Genie was caught by the woman and was forced to return the apple. He was punished and was forced to go to prison for years and years and years.
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