Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Summer

Today room 1 were doing a poem called Summer. First we had to do it in our reading/writing book. Next in the poem we had to put in our 5 senses,see,taste,smell,hear,and feel.Finally we had to post it on our blog. What I enjoyed doing was creating the poem in my book. What I might do differently next time is make the slide bigger.

Thursday, October 25, 2018

Seed life

Yesterday room 1 were doing another poem called Seed life.First we had to write down the poem in our writing book once we finished our boarder.Next we made a colourful boarder and pictures to the poem.Finally we had to post it on our blog.What I enjoyed was writing the poem down.What I might do differently next time is make my boarder more different.

Wednesday, October 17, 2018

opening doors storyboard

Today room 1 were doing another pobble 365 called opening doors.first we had to find adverbs and highlight them.Next we had to create a story board then when we did that we had to create pictures describing that adverb.Finally we had to share it to our blog.What I enjoyed was making the pictures to describe the adverb.What I might do differently next time is give you the link to the view page of the storyboard.

Monday, June 25, 2018

Recount: tuhi mai tuhi atu.





Topic: writing.

Write about: tuhi mai tuhi atu.


During class time after play bell room 1 do tuhi mai tuhi atu.


First, we go on our main blog site and then go to our focus class/school. I then choose a blog post to read or look at.


Next, what we do on tuhi mai tuhi atu is we post a positive thoughtful helpful comment. The reason why we do this is because we like to encourage other people and we’re a digital class.


Then when we finished the post we share it to our class hand-in-sheet.


I enjoy doing tuhi mai tuhi atu because I like to communicate with other people.


























Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Hanging on pobble 365


today we have been learning how to do pobble 365 first I had to take a screenshot of the picture for the day.
\Next we had to answer the questions and we had to write sentences not little sentences.
Lastly we had to put the link on our hand in sheet if we finished so Mrs Wallace can check if were wrong or right with the questions.
What I enjoyed was answering the questions what I might do differently next time is make the box smaller.







Hanging On - Question time!

WALT discuss and think more deeply in order to answer questions about a text.

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  1. What do you think has happened to their nest? The storms wind was so powerful that it blew the nest away.
  2. What is the mother possum thinking? I think the mother is thinking that it takes a lot of effort to carry all seven children.
  3. Which of the baby possums has the best seat and why? I think the baby possum in the middle has the best seat because it is getting squeezed and it is holding on to the mother really tight.  
  4. Possums have incredible senses. Which of our senses do you think we use the most? Give example. I think the sense we use the most is sight because if there’s a nail on the footpath you will not see it and you might step on it.    

Wednesday, November 29, 2017

My weekend to piahia beach

today we have been learning about recount writing here is my writing






On the bursting hot last weekend me and my family went to cold Paihia beach to cool us down from the hot bursting weather First we went to get lunch we were going to Mcdonald’s to eat what we had from it Then we went to go swimming in the freezing cold water it was so cold that we ran out of it because we couldn’t stand the freezing cold water. Then Finally we went back to kaikohe to have fish and chips for dinner and went home to my Comfortable bed and laid down on my smooth comfortable pillow but I was playing roblox and the roblox game that I was playing was boxing simulator 2 it is a game that you're Supposed to get really big tall and really really strong 10 hours later I was at 30million strength that time i was the most strongest person on the server then other people started playing on the server then I decided I didn’t want to be big so I pressed this button that said you can become small but you keep all your strength so I pushed it and I was the smallest person but the strongest then I was getting Exhausted and tired and went dreaming of in my head.

Monday, November 20, 2017

maui and the giant fish


Today we did a practice activity for the Summer Learning Journey.
First we read the story Maui and the Giant Fish.
Then we wrote 3 facts we learned from the story.
Here are my facts:
    Maui and the giant fish

Fact 1: Maui dreamed of a day that he could go fishing with his older brothers.

Fact 2: Maui took the jaw bone his ancestor Muri Ranga Whenua had given him and bound it securely to the line to use it as a fishing hook.

Fact 3: Maui hid on the waka in the hull to go fishing with his brothers. The thing I found challenging is thinking of the ideas to make it sound more interesting. Next time I will try to make it even more interesting by making better words.


Thursday, August 10, 2017

digging deeper


me and the teacher discussed about digging deeper into our writing to make it more interesting by adding more information in our writing.
   my digital learning is making bigger more interesting sentences by adding more detail 

the most trickiest one I found was trying to put the words in front of my digging deeper hole.
next time I will make another one of my picture more interesting.


Monday, August 7, 2017

Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

WALT     Write our opinion
 We had a discussion about how to use OREO to help us with our opinion writing.  
O= Opinion.R=Reason.E=Example.O=state Opinion.   
Here is my opinion.                 
The trickiest thing I found was my thinking of my Examples. 


Should kids have a TV in their bedroom?

I think kids shouldn't  have a TV in their bedroom.
You might not go to school.
You might not go to school because you will be too lazy to get up and get ready for school because you stayed up too late the night before. 
you will become obsessed with the screen. because you will be addicted and become a game freak by watching TV too long which will affect your behaviour. 
In addition you will get grumpy. you will watch TV all night and have a grumpy mood in the morning.
This is why I believe kids shouldn't have a TV in their room.


Thursday, July 27, 2017

WALT dig deeper and use words that are more interesting in our writing

the cat sleept.

the cat sleept on my bed.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour.

the sleepy grey cat sleept on my bed for 1 hour and curled in a ball

Thursday, July 6, 2017


                My Word Bank
WALT find better synonyms to make our writing more interesting

  • Make a copy in your writing folder.
  • Rename it.

Verb from the poem
Synonym for that verb
Creep
scary
This old man is scary as a lion.
sleep
stretch
The cat took a big stretch on my bed and went to sleep.
sleeping
drowsy
The lion is feeling drowsy and  Laid  under a tree.
creep
frightening
my big brother Sneaked behind me and gave me a fright.
scary
shocking
I touched a Electrical fence and gave me a shock.










Thursday, June 29, 2017


On fire brigade cup I went to room 11.  maths first we did we did fives and tens and ones. then the bell rang we had morning tea next we got free time on our  Chromebooks. next we played prodigy the bell rang for brain break we had a run Before we had our milk then we had to run with a partner then we went back to class . after we did reading for reading we did Reading Eggspress we went to the Stadium and did writing in Practice then the  bell rang for lunch time  I had some Doritos  the bell rang for big play I played soccer then  the bell rang we read two books  then we played soccer at the back field then the bell rang for home time and we went home.

Wednesday, May 17, 2017

WALT express an idea or opinion supported with evidence

I think we shouldn't have smart phones in class. 
Phones are distractions. Phones are distractions because when the Teacher is teaching we will be too busy playing on our phones. Students will steal someones phone. Phones are expensive because They cost a lot of money. 
Students cause arguments. Students cause arguments because if you Lost your phone and they have the same phone you will argue over it. 
And this is why I strongly believe we should not have smart phones in class.

Wednesday, April 12, 2017

WALT express an idea or opinoin



the ants carry crumbs larger than themselves to their secret tunnels the pigeon makes soft noises as he builds his nest the dog snaps  at flies outside her kennel and the  snail is moving houses again leaving a shining trail
on the garden path